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PancakeSushi's avatar

You can set metronomes by this timbre; and each line is soaked in dreary monotony, so richly described. Maybe it's me, but it's not depressed, but a wink and a nudge, an subtle undercurrent of wry acceptance here. Bravo

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"The coffee sighs, the chair receives, / the morning breathes its small routines."

Exquisite, Josh!

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