Such a beautiful and tender musing. Such a sweet reminder that, in the vast expanse of the universe, there is a place for us where we can be free and we can make a home for ourselves. Great sonnet!
The world with all its details β from galaxies down to villages down to oranges and pencil tracks and xyzβ¦
The sun sends particles relentlessly which make the sky glow green and purple while we are busy colouring our nails, or arguing about tabs vs. spaces, pineapple on pizza, whatever.
And in every drop of orange juice there is (on average) the same mix of the whole fruit. The largest machines can analyze the smallest things.
Josh, your poem turns the vast indifference of the universe into a canvas for quiet, human beauty. Each line reminds us that meaning can bloom even where nothing seems to matter.
Such a beautiful and tender musing. Such a sweet reminder that, in the vast expanse of the universe, there is a place for us where we can be free and we can make a home for ourselves. Great sonnet!
Thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts. I really appreciate it ππ§‘
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The world with all its details β from galaxies down to villages down to oranges and pencil tracks and xyzβ¦
The sun sends particles relentlessly which make the sky glow green and purple while we are busy colouring our nails, or arguing about tabs vs. spaces, pineapple on pizza, whatever.
And in every drop of orange juice there is (on average) the same mix of the whole fruit. The largest machines can analyze the smallest things.
Oh, I love this, Daniela. Thank you so much for sharing π§‘
Very tender poem! Just beautiful
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Josh, your poem turns the vast indifference of the universe into a canvas for quiet, human beauty. Each line reminds us that meaning can bloom even where nothing seems to matter.
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment π§‘πΉ
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The cosmic indifference and the held door existing side by side feels right. Maybe meaning isnβt erased by scale. Maybe itβs defined by proximity.
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So beautiful
Thank you, Hina πΉπ§‘
i really liked that kind of post and you write it really well
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It's beautiful!!
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I actually made a tiny sound at the stranger holds a door part...
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"entropy will claim what love has grown
as surely as it snuffs the candleβs flame."
These lines are beautiful and they capture the fleeting nature of all life beautifully.