Your poem is truly beautiful. It has a special kind of melody to it. But I admit, what I loved most is that you didn’t leave the reader in drama — you gave them hope.
What a wonderful piece. I truly loved this. Your lines carries so much depth and truth and each verse spoke to me. Your expression voices what so many feels yet finds difficulty in voicing them. I read myself in between your lines. It’s such a powerful piece that carries a very important message❤️
Great job. Enjoyed reading! Great job showing vulnerability and description of a hard place. Very resourceful of using that experience! Thanks for sharing!
Sending you my understanding for those hard days and the trust to keep the heart open and receive the wonder and beauty of nature. Here is my recent poem, moving through a rainstorm internally and externally. Hope you’ll give it a read. 🙏🏼
Your poem is truly beautiful. It has a special kind of melody to it. But I admit, what I loved most is that you didn’t leave the reader in drama — you gave them hope.
Thank you so much, Phoeby ♥️ 🙏
Beautiful! You capture a very real aspect of our lives that almost everyone can relate to. 💛
Thank you so much, Kristina! ♥️
I especially like how you remind the reader that they are still getting up, still showing up, still moving forward and their heart still has strength.
Thank you so much for your supportive comment, Dorie. You are very appreciated 💜
What a wonderful piece. I truly loved this. Your lines carries so much depth and truth and each verse spoke to me. Your expression voices what so many feels yet finds difficulty in voicing them. I read myself in between your lines. It’s such a powerful piece that carries a very important message❤️
I'm so happy you like it, Imi. I truly appreciate your comment and presence 🤍
My pleasure! 💓
I love the truth of this, we still rise because our heart still beats. Every night has a sunrise at the end.
I love that you closed it with a positive note
So glad you liked it, Marwa! 💜
There is a rhythm in it,a flow,love this 🫶
Thank you, Hina! ❤️ 🙏
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You said it. You described the feeling we get through the days, weeks, months, and years. The ups and downs. The journey of Life. Thanks for the read.
Thank you for reading 🙏
Glad to see you end it on a high note. Don't sink in to the downward spiral
For sure, thanks for reading! 🤍
Absolutely
Great job. Enjoyed reading! Great job showing vulnerability and description of a hard place. Very resourceful of using that experience! Thanks for sharing!
Thank you so much for your comment, Pamela! 💜
Sending you my understanding for those hard days and the trust to keep the heart open and receive the wonder and beauty of nature. Here is my recent poem, moving through a rainstorm internally and externally. Hope you’ll give it a read. 🙏🏼
https://open.substack.com/pub/fairiesandgnomes/p/rainy-season?r=19igav&utm_medium=ios
Great piece 💕💕💕. Love it really.
Absolutely, Gemma! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and share your thoughts. 🙏💙