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Kregg Hill's avatar

Beautiful, Josh ❤️

Josh's avatar

Thank you so much, Kregg 🙏♥️

Gary L Taylor's avatar

Really beautifully written. I loved that.

A great sentiment, too,. As long as you've lived and had life on your terms, it shouldn't matter who knows of us or remembers how deeds. That we were here for them ourselves is quite enough.

Josh's avatar

Thank you so much, Gary 🙏💙

AsukaHotaru's avatar

okay yes—this is my kind of ambition~

bench over podium, breeze over spotlight

the ending made me go “yeah… that’s enough actually”

very quiet. very right~

Josh's avatar

Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts. 💙✨

A.R. Wright's avatar

I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing it.

Josh's avatar

Thanks for reading! So glad you like it 🙏♥️

Hina Gondal's avatar

This is so beautiful

Josh's avatar

Thank you so much, Hina ♥️🫶

Kaye's avatar

Lovely poem, thank for sharing.

Josh's avatar

Thank you so much 🙏 💙

Kaye's avatar

Most certainly.

Dorie Snow/雪多丽's avatar

I love the simplicity of this poem, it’s such a beautiful tribute to a life lived well that didn’t go after fame and glory but preferred quiet, beautiful moments with people that they loved. At least that’s how I feel when I read it.🩷

Josh's avatar

Thank you, Dorie! So glad you like it ♥️✨

Phoeby's avatar

It's beautiful

Josh's avatar

Thank you, Phoeby 🙏❤️