This piece brought to mind Robert Frost’s “Nothing Gold Can Stay,” a poem I’ve loved since long before I truly understood it. Your words carry the same bittersweet truth: beauty is precious because it’s fleeting. Thank you for the reminder to live fully in the moment… the past is gone, the future isn't promised, and what we have right now is enough to cherish.
Such a beautiful and thoughtful piece. Each line spoke to me, and I love how you distilled the essence of the message in every verse through a different perspective, making the poem deeply captivating. Beautifully done. 🖤
When a flower blooms with all its glory, the colors, the scent , the brilliant design, it lasts for a very brief time. That is what makes it most precious.
This piece brought to mind Robert Frost’s “Nothing Gold Can Stay,” a poem I’ve loved since long before I truly understood it. Your words carry the same bittersweet truth: beauty is precious because it’s fleeting. Thank you for the reminder to live fully in the moment… the past is gone, the future isn't promised, and what we have right now is enough to cherish.
Thank you, Andrea! You're right - all we have is this moment, and I really appreciate you taking a moment to read. 🩵🫶
It was beautifully written. I enjoyed it very much.
Such a beautiful art work ! Touches my heart . Death and resilience. Will and helplessness! Loved it
Thank you so much for your kind words! ♥️
Brilliant as always
Aw, thank you so much, Hina! You're more appreciated than you know. 😊❤️🫶
I loved that, the whole thing reads and rhymes superbly, and the ending is wonderful.
Thanks so much, Gary! I really appreciate you taking the time 💛🫶
Such a beautiful and thoughtful piece. Each line spoke to me, and I love how you distilled the essence of the message in every verse through a different perspective, making the poem deeply captivating. Beautifully done. 🖤
Thank you so much! 🙏 I greatly appreciate your kind words 💜🫶
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When a flower blooms with all its glory, the colors, the scent , the brilliant design, it lasts for a very brief time. That is what makes it most precious.
You're so right, Marwa. Thank you for your comment 💜🙏
A ghost in progress
So well put
So glad you liked it, thank you! 🙏🫶
Seeing death as freedom is the wisest way to live life. I really like your poem because is powerful and soft in the same time.
So glad you like it, Phoeby! Thank you 💙🫶
Wonderful..
Thank you so much 🙏 ♥️
Beautiful ❤️❤️
Thank you so much 💙
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Beautiful because we are intertwined for only brief moments.
Absolutely, thank you so much for reading. ❤️
This is a wonderful poem! Thank you for posting it. Touched me.