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imi's avatar

This is such a powerful piece, it carries the rhythm of perseverance in every line. I love how you captured the dialogue between doubt and defiance, how the loudest battles are the quietest ones within. The lines about “facing the mirror’s unbending gaze” really stayed with me, it’s such a striking image of self-confrontation and courage. Beautifully written, truly. 🤍🤍

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Thank you so much for your comment, Imi! You are greatly appreciated ❤️🫶

imi's avatar

Likewise! ❤️

Gary L Taylor's avatar

Something I can definitely relate to, with the biggest doubters being within, but the whole piece was so positive and is something that inspires.

Excellent stuff.

Josh's avatar

Thanks so much for sharing, Gary! 🙏 You're absolutely right about the biggest doubters being within.

Marwa Mabrouk's avatar

Very inspirational , gives a high does of energy 🙌

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Thank you, Marwa! Glad you like it 💜

Hina Gondal's avatar

Dose of positivity 💞

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Thank you, Hina! 🙏 Hope you're having a great day ♥️

Yuvraj Rana's avatar

The biggest doubter really lives within 🙌. This was really beautiful and relatable.

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Thank you so much 🫶🙏

Kristina Ray's avatar

Really well done! Relatable and inspiring! 💛

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Thank you, Kristina! 🙏 ♥️

Mike Winters's avatar

Fantastic!

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Thanks so much! 💛

Rebecca's avatar

Beautiful read, and a powerful closure. Love this!

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Thank you for taking the time to read! ♥️💙

Quinlee's avatar

This flows beautifully!

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So glad you liked it! 🩵