Josh, you’ve captured the fleeting beauty of life so gracefully. Your words remind us that the essence of living is not in holding onto moments, but in chasing them, loving them while they last, and opening our hearts to the next ones with the same wonder. I came across your post after a long time. I hope you don't mind.
I love your poem, it has everything. The fear of time flowing incessantly (I can't live without a watch on my wrist) and the love of the chase, the instability that frightens us but is the electric shock of life. Thanks for making me think with your words, let's read each other of you like, have a nice day!
Oh my goodness, be still my beating heart. This like -> The clock becomes a lover and a thief—
we chase its face across the burning day,
collecting joys as temporary, brief
as breath on glass that fades and falls away.
GORGEOUS!
Aw, thanks so much! ❤️✨
Sooo beautiful!!
Thank you so much 💙✨
What a beauty 😍
Thank you so much, Hina! ♥️🫶
Josh, you’ve captured the fleeting beauty of life so gracefully. Your words remind us that the essence of living is not in holding onto moments, but in chasing them, loving them while they last, and opening our hearts to the next ones with the same wonder. I came across your post after a long time. I hope you don't mind.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this. You're truly appreciated 💙🙏
I love your poem, it has everything. The fear of time flowing incessantly (I can't live without a watch on my wrist) and the love of the chase, the instability that frightens us but is the electric shock of life. Thanks for making me think with your words, let's read each other of you like, have a nice day!
Thank you for taking the time to leave such a wonderful comment, Nick! 💙
Your poems have a standard of excellence and beauty that's superlative. You never disappoint Josh
This really means a lot to me. I truly appreciate your presence, friend 💙🙏
You're most welcome
The clock becomes a lover and a thief—
we chase its face across the burning day,
Loved it ❤️
Thank you so much, Marwa! Glad you like it 🙏♥️
It's very, very beautiful. It has a velvety softness
Thank you so much, Phoeby 💙
What a beautiful piece 🥹. Your words flow like water 🌊.
Aw, thank you so much for taking the time to read ♥️✨
You’re welcome!
I love this interface with aliveness that you're presenting. Thank you for sharing it. =)
Also... always on my to do list: learn to make life pain into a pleasure ritual
Aw, thanks so much, Alisha! I'm glad you love it! ♥️✨
It is super loveable! <3 And then by association, that also makes YOU super loveable! =) Nice work and thank U for sharing your creativity.