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Elijah Westin's avatar

Wabi-sabi my friend wabi-sabi

I often find more beauty in the broken, displaced and disheveled parts of life

Its what makes it beautiful in my mind

Josh's avatar

Completely agree. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, Elijah πŸ™πŸ’™

AsukaHotaru's avatar

That fungal threads like chandeliers line made me grin~ because it’s such a weirdly pretty picture and it feels true without trying too hard.

Josh's avatar

So glad you liked it πŸŒΉπŸ™

Sehar Insights's avatar

The last lines hit hardest: maybe the world’s hidden beauty only opens for those patient enough to notice.

Josh's avatar

Thank you πŸ™β™₯️

Andrea Thorfinson's avatar

I absolutely loved this. I’ve always been drawn to the β€œlook twice” places, flowers and weeds pushing through sidewalk cracks, the tiny ecosystems inside rotting logs… little worlds most people walk right past. And the line about wrinkles really touched me, too. Not just hands, but the faces that carry whole lifetimes of joy and sadness in their lines. Such a beautiful reminder that what we call ugly is often just beauty waiting to be seen.

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Thank you so much, Andrea β™₯️✨

Aaliya's avatar

Josh your words capture the hidden beauty in the overlooked and the misunderstood. It reminds us that sometimes, what we perceive as ugly or neglected holds a world of wonder and potential. β™₯️

Josh's avatar

Thank you, Aaliya! So glad you enjoyed it πŸ™πŸŒΉ

Phoeby's avatar

Beautiful piece, as always.

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Thank you, Phoeby πŸ™πŸŒΉ

Dawnithic's avatar

Josh, your poem gently reshapes the way we see the world. You reveal that beauty is not absent, only overlooked. Your images turn decay into devotion and darkness into light. Thank you for teaching us to look twice...and deeper.

Josh's avatar

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment. I appreciate it πŸ™πŸ’™

Dawnithic's avatar

Thanks for your appreciation 🎈✨.

Hina Gondal's avatar

What a brilliance

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Thank you so much, Hina πŸ™πŸŒΉ

WiseWomanWickedTongue's avatar

Everything is beautiful and ugly. It just depends where you are standing when you look. Loved your poem.

Josh's avatar

Absolutely. Thank you, I'm so glad you loved it πŸ™β™₯️